bluemooncat enormous thing 26. poem about someone in the nude
(warning: nude people sometimes do things 
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In dreams of the night
She lay alone in her bed
Soft skin against soft sheets
Cotton, a caress as gentle
As his fingertips
Exploring peaks and swells
The ticklish part at her waist
Luscious hips, the crease
Toward lower lips
The moistness demonstrating
Her readiness as
His fingers slide deep
She sighs as his slow strokes
Stir wanting
In dreams of the night
She lay alone in her bed
But he feels her too.
Comments (31)
excellent work
OK, I permanently retire and will always leave it up to you and Carolyn.
This is beautifully written.
@songoftheheart - do NOT retire. i have liked both of your poems that i’ve read (are there just two?) and would enjoy reading more.
@Grannys_Place - thank you
@buddy71 - shouldn’t they be closer together?
@godfatherofgreenbay - thank you.
very nicely done
“nude people sometimes do things”.. lol..You’re kidding me, right?
lovely poem.. hot as hell.
@awoolham - i have to put up a warning label. some people don’t enjoy that sort of thing. sillies.
glad you liked it.
@lanney - thank you. good morning.
I like the way you write and think. I am in a rut and need some sensual stimulation. Last night my wife wanted to talk about hermeneutics and exegeses while in bed. Something is wrong. lol
frank
The last two lines really make this.
@ANVRSADDAY - i love it when you talk dirty to me.
@Cancerous_Sagittarius - i hoped.
@songoftheheart - you best not retire, you both move me. and inspire each other.@promisesunshine - and i like this very much.
@longshadow618 - i’m very glad to hear that.
please repost this on wp sos carolyn can read
@longshadow618 - good suggestion. i’ll have to see if i remember how to do that.
yeowza!
@plantinthewindow - you didn’t like it?
naked people do indeed do things. wow. yes they do. Love it.
@promisesunshine - of course I did. that’s like, “ouchiewawa!” or, “oooh, baby!”
@leaflesstree - thanks
@plantinthewindow - i was begging for more attention. i’m like that.
Such exquisite words. Ones that made the heart beat faster just with the thought. Especially since the thought is there and now I’m wide awake and can’t go back sleep. Well done, my dear… It truly speaks volumes!!
@MzSilver - i thought maybe you’d like that. although i am sorry to keep you awake.
Its a little warm in here..
Let me guess, you’ve been reading some romance novels again?
@Zoz36 - not a one. not a fan of poetry?
Not that style. Sorry. After I took a cold shower…
@Zoz36 -
as long as you needed a cold shower. and you recc’d (of course. you always do)
Ah after a some what crappy day, I knew you could slap me up side of the head or make me laugh. What a pal!!!
@Zoz36 - made you laugh?? i’m deeply offended.
Oppps. I ment that in a good way. Sorry.
As I don’t read the end of the line. Color me stupid…