January 22, 2012
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warmth for a cold winter night
danger, danger, will robinson. it ain’t about hot chocolate.
two naughty ladies on xanga
hunger in her eyes, in her thoughts. blood rushing, settling in deep, dark, wet place need pounding as she saw the turgid, pulsing cock- proud, thick, jutting forward yes, she wanted. wanted to feel that cock slide slowly dip deeply into her steamy hot mouth she took it without asking- took it as far as it would go feeling each ripple, each ridge until the smooth cap touched her throat and she held it still savoring the musky tang, the heat, the fullness of his manly probe. swallowed slowly. drew her mouth gently away, sucking the length, tongue pressed against flesh her tongue dipped around ridges and across the expanse licking at the sweet offering he gave her licking the whole length of the gift swirling tongue gently around the love sacks again pressing tongue against flesh returning to the head, lips to kiss before the need overwhelmed her and she took the member into her hot mouth sliding as she sucked, once, twice, a hundred times faster, slower, gentle, hard. Always hot and wet always hungry, so hungry. For the prize. his soft moans let her know the prize was soon hot cum squirted. she swallowed again and again. not a drop wasted.
@adamswomanfell
Comments (48)
I LOVE this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, then I LOVE to give BJ’s!

HUGS to you, naughty woman!
@AdamsWomanFell - super cheesy grin.
@promisesunshine - @AdamsWomanFell - You ladies are sooooo naughty!!! My kind of friends…

Holy Crap! I didn’t know people were allowed to write stuff like this on Xanga. Mimiko loves to eat pussy. Perhaps we will write something about that. My my, we’re all aflutter now heehee
@runisom48 - shhh… it’s a secret.
she did *what*?? well i never.
not now it isn’t
WOW!
and that’s all I got…
Ladies, go find your guys. I had my day,now you have yours.
Wow.
::fans self::
Gross.
@whyzat - @RighteousBruin - didn’t mean to be offensive. sorry.
I need my fan, or to roll around in the snow outside to cool off!
I thought this was both honest and artful. I think there are still a lot of questions about sex and female sexuality floating around in the collective mind and anything that illuminates that is quite worthwhile. IMO.
And wowie zowie!
well then
@RighteousBruin - I was not offended, just being wistful.
@promisesunshine - @AdamsWomanFell - ‘oh, my woodness’ leave you two alone for the day. and yes on both accounts
meanwhile i was tattooing a tree
O.O oh uhm lovely…steamy poem
Very, very sensuous. I think you did a great job of being sensuous without being pornographic. I loved this.
Is it hot in here or what?
Love this poem.
Alrighty then.
hhhhhhhhhhhHOTtttttttttttttttt verse…. hot, hot, hot, hot, hot.
( place cold shower here )
love this
@AdamsWomanFell - Is it the power that cums with control of the situation?
@ccrider17 - It’s REALLY loving the look in his eyes…the noises he makes…the way he touches my head and face and body while I’m doing it…and feeling glad I can give him such pleasure.
@AdamsWomanFell - @ccrider17 - excuse me, you two. this is my hot poem place.
@AdamsWomanFell - I agree. I love seeing HER eyes, hearing her vocal reactions, seeing her body respond….
@promisesunshine - You’re absolutely correct. And this was one hot poem!
@ccrider17 - never mind, you keep talking like that to the applewoman, you can hang out here.
(glad you liked it and didn’t leave in a huff)
@ccrider17 - Yah.
I might be here all week!
@promisesunshine - Ha! You post a hot poem and you get ME camped out on your site!
@promisesunshine - Huff? I guess some did not approve?
@AdamsWomanFell - I’m gonna pitch a tent here too. LOL.
@ccrider17 - Ha!
@ccrider17 - you know how it goes. bring hot chocolate. @AdamsWomanFell - and marshmallows.
ummm, yeouch! you leave us with some steamy images. I need to go running now. think about baseball. take a shower. all three.
@RighteousBruin - ha!
@plantinthewindow - hit a home run with that.
@promisesunshine - it would have to be some hard wood to do that.
Okay, I don’t know how I missed this but …….. (four cold showers later) this is the hottest erotica I think I have ever read and I have read……. shoot, off to another cold shower.
@vexations -
um, yes…hot!
@songoftheheart - can’t believe i put this bad boy on here. i hold the apple responsible.
@promisesunshine - LOL! She lives life fully, doesn’t she? She’s trying to get me to loosen up and back into life. She’s great. You have great writing, and great art.
@songoftheheart - adore her. and i don’t really hold her responsible.
back into life sounds perfect. keep dreaming, writing, painting. (reading too)
heehee I definitely remember this one. But gosh, who is reading backlog from a year ago? gah.
@distractedbyzombies - well, it’s getting a little action today.
but i don’t think it had anything to do with the ex rating.
@promisesunshine - xanga drama. I could live without it, honestly. can’t we order with the drama on the side?
@distractedbyzombies - i thought i had. i’ll have what she’s having.
@promisesunshine - heeheeheeheeha! but
. sorry.