May 7, 2013
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silversteinish
Ations If we meet and I say, “Hi,”
That’s a salutation.
If you ask me how I feel,
That’s consideration.
If we stop and talk awhile,
That’s a conversation.
If we understand each other,
That’s communication.
If we argue, scream and fight,
That’s an altercation.
If later we apologize,
That’s reconciliation.
if we help each other home,
That’s cooperation.
And all these ations added up
Make civilization. (And if I say this is a wonderful poem,
Is that exaggeration?)That’s a poem by the delightful Shel Silverstein. (from A Light in the Attic)
#wintsh 25. Read a collection of poems by one individual and write 3 poems inspired by or in the style of their work. #npm extended because I’m me.
I think I’m allergic to morning
It comes without warning
Nighttime I’m mourning
The alarm hurts my ears
Steals some of my years
A dream disappears
My covers attack me
Tentacles though fuzzy
Hold on exactly
When I get out of bed
I fall on my head
Thinking it my feet instead
You can’t make me get up
What? There’s coffee in my cup?
Sleepyhead- catch up!where winds up over there
why whistles in the sky
when willy nilly ends up then
what will you make of that
but…
who happened to miss the memooI think I’ll have a yellow day
just like a daffodil
or perhaps purple is the way
to go, if you will.
Sometimes the day requires red
with its powerful refrain
or a soft pink instead
as I stroll down life’s lane.
It’s best to avoid the black
of storm clouds in the night
and brown shows a lack
of brightness to my sight.
When so many colors are around
the choice is yours to make
a color day that brings you down
or a color that makes you wake.
Comments (16)
heh. so with you on your first one. lost me in the second one. third is brilliant yellow. <3
I love Actions……(My you have been creative)
Regards the second — mornings can be toxic to some of us. winds up over there…..(I love the alliterations.)Colors, moods and personality….one of my favorite topics.
Delightful!
I like your “–ations”. Love Shel Silverstein. Allergic to mornings… that used to be moi!
Wait, I’m not supposed to be on my head?
This is a happy shiny bunch. A good start to the day.
Shel would be so proud!
I hate morning too.
great work
@vexations - @ZSA_MD - sigh. “ations” is shel’s poem. the rest are mine.
@Bels_Kaylar - i was trying to be clever.
@songoftheheart - thank you. it was fun.
@distractedbyzombies - no. we’re not.
@RighteousBruin - :)
@angys_coco - uh huh. i need more coffee right now.
@godfatherofgreenbay - thank you.
Ooh! I love Shel’s poemy poems and I love yours, too!!!
Fun, delightful, whimsical, paints fun pics in a person’s head! 
I’m a night person…so I can relate!
I love yellowy, purple days! They bring me joy! Bluish green days make me mellow! Red days make me hypery hyper! Orange days are fun!
HUGS!!!
I had a bit of a different approach to morning.. I’m groggy for about 2 hours after waking most of them something sugary something or other. but traditionally I love sunrise over sunswet. so I suppose i’l never cuss morning for long.
oh that’s right fantastic poem! claps
and such
I am supposed to stay on task.
@adamswomanback - i need to go back to the rainbow. i missed a few.
@starmanjones - i’m groggy for about 8 hours.
@promisesunshine - til the last hour antsy to go home?
These made me smile. Shel Silverstein was one of the first poetry books I read to my kids… much better than the insipid stuff usually peddled to kids!!
love shel. i like your words muchly too. had he know you, i know he would have writ much about you
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