October 30, 2012
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stuff for that thing that ends tomorrow
#whimsh 45. Write a FLASH FICTION entitled “Sonata”
She sat at the piano bench, short legs resting on a covered box. The teacher taught simple songs and gave stickers for songs well played. His hand gently reminded her of the correct hand position. She practiced.
Covered box no longer needed, reminders no longer required, but still received, she practiced. Short excerpts from Beethoven added to her repertoire. Stickers replaced by pats on her shoulder and soft y whispered, “Beautiful” close to her ear. She stopped practicing, not wanting pats and whispers and touches. And the piano was no longer a friend.
Until one day, she silently left her lesson. Tears unshed. And she never played another note.
(32. Write a STORY about rape that never actually mentions rape) pushing it, I know.
My favorite sonata bit. pathetique movement 3 (which again, i can’t play anywhere near that fast)
55. Write a POEM as a love letter you could never give to someone
What would you see looking in my eyes? The shine of oil paints The sparkle of laughter The shimmer of unshed tears What would you hear in my words? The longing Do you know how far I would go? To know every one of your stories To hear your voice To feel you in the same space Would you want me there?
Comments (11)
love this poem
very sad story and i works
I bet I’d see the mother cuz thats what I’d need to see… selfish I know
the flash: it’s too bad it was spoiled for her like that. bastard
well done
excellent work
Bravo!
Well done.
wonderful. love that piece of music, too. (both bits of writing…vulnerable. well done.) <3
@Bels_Kaylar - complete fabrication. and old melodrama that i wasn’t going to share.
@promisesunshine - oxo one felt ‘created’, the other felt ‘real’. but ‘vulnerability’ in both. oxo
If you can play that piece at all, I am totally in awe. Is the poem about anyone I might know?
@songoftheheart - much slower. nope. just a little melodrama.